Apr 20, 2017 10:57 PMRe: Willowmic Odiea
|"A world full of magic" isn't really gonna cut it. Care to elaborate what this world is? Is it an alternate Earth? Or a made-up planet in another galaxy? Also, the character background is very sparse. Tell us about her childhood, how she grew up, what her parents and friends were like, good and bad times. Doesn't have to be very elaborate, just a general idea of where she came from. |
Can you also describe more of the combat and non-combat skills? Like what sports she played, what type of cuisine she is experienced in, what her reading level is at etc.
So far so good. Just needs more description.
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Apr 22, 2017 3:22 AMRe: Cassandra Abbott
|Apparently there was an error and this CS was attributed to a Guest. will whoever posted it please log in and alert the staff so we can transfer it to its proper owner.|
|When C4 comes a knocking, BOOM!|
Apr 22, 2017 5:36 PMRe: Cassandra Abbott
Apr 22, 2017 6:22 PMRe: Cassandra Abbott
|Answered your questions.|
Apr 24, 2017 9:47 AMRe: Cassandra Abbott
|Approved, with the standard boilerplate warning|